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board-man-gets-paid t1_iyvyjdr wrote
Reply to comment by UDPviper in Rooftop Synthcat, me, MS Paint, 2022 by SRMasaryk
The trees are organic. The city in the background doesn’t appear as “lines” it looks more organic because of the mosaic of lights.
And the focal point is the moon. It’s the first thing that draws your eyes
board-man-gets-paid t1_iyvy6cp wrote
Reply to comment by UDPviper in Rooftop Synthcat, me, MS Paint, 2022 by SRMasaryk
I’m not sure you know what you’re talking about
board-man-gets-paid t1_iyt7zne wrote
Reply to comment by InspectorFadGadget in Rooftop Synthcat, me, MS Paint, 2022 by SRMasaryk
Not sure how that last part applies here lmao
board-man-gets-paid t1_iyt6e1o wrote
Reply to comment by InspectorFadGadget in Rooftop Synthcat, me, MS Paint, 2022 by SRMasaryk
The terrain is laid out on a grid that doesn’t mean everything else is just lines. The negative space in the moon is distracting to me in what is otherwise a fairly realistic comp that just has a grid overlay. Just seems out of place and that’s my two cents. You can respectfully disagree but don’t think the word hooligan is appropriate for what was merely feedback
board-man-gets-paid t1_iyt4mbc wrote
Reply to comment by InspectorFadGadget in Rooftop Synthcat, me, MS Paint, 2022 by SRMasaryk
This doesn’t make sense to me. You’re saying the lines make the moon less of a focal point?
board-man-gets-paid t1_iystkn0 wrote
Reply to Rooftop Synthcat, me, MS Paint, 2022 by SRMasaryk
Looks great. Not sure if you’re looking for feedback but the one thing is I think the moon divisions take away from the composition. I’d go with just a solid moon otherwise great work
board-man-gets-paid t1_iyx2xby wrote
Reply to comment by SRMasaryk in Rooftop Synthcat, me, MS Paint, 2022 by SRMasaryk
It’s not a sunset. Has to be a moon based on the color of the brightness of the sky/lack of color gradient you’d see in a sunset