An absolutely beautifully crafted work of art. You make the reader feel the MC's worry and love. You make it easy to understand where he is coming from and how much he cares for his AI-turned-human girlfriend. And in the same moment, you can understand why it would be so overwhelming for her to deal with the rush of emotions feel almost everyday. Beautiful, just beautiful!
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Reply to comment by WanderingAnonymous in [WP] You hug your sobbing AI girlfriend closely and pull her in for a hug. She had recently gone through a procedure to transfer her conscience into a real life human body produced in a lab to be closer to you, but the stress of having true emotions was greater than any data could prepare her for by ThatOneKrazyKaptain
An absolutely beautifully crafted work of art. You make the reader feel the MC's worry and love. You make it easy to understand where he is coming from and how much he cares for his AI-turned-human girlfriend. And in the same moment, you can understand why it would be so overwhelming for her to deal with the rush of emotions feel almost everyday. Beautiful, just beautiful!